Thoughts on this script?

1. You don't string.Comma your numbers
2. Your text is not aligned properly:
3. There's no feedback when someone buys something besides a chat message (bad, you have an entirely seperate UI to show this), make the button pulse or something
4. You appear to be using default gmod fonts

If you're gonna try to sell this here try the following:

1. Ability to add weapons in game
2. Make the UI cleaner (new font, better colors etc...)
3. Weapons categories for Knives, Snipers, etc
4. Search bar to search for weapons

theres a lot more you can do to improve this, but it's a good start so far

And add ability for skins like crowbar reskins or something

And add ability to use alternative payments, example point shop 2 points or custom alternatives. Beside that I can see how its a workshop script, it have very good potential but need more functions. Don't forget to also have the ability to use props instead of npc, or a simple command.

Good luck tho.

ByYuyu♥at 9th of July 2018 18:45:12

And add ability for skins like crowbar reskins or something

Why dumb Threebows' post? He is giving him good feedback.

Also, something I suggest is using a diff UI because atm it is too similar to Shendows UI.

Thanks for the feedback guys! Will get on it right away, I'm already making an admin panel for in game additions and config, as for the UI, I did take Insperation from Shendows UI since I use that color alot, It's because I like flat designs, I'll try to give it more of a material design.

As for the Money side, I'll see about Pointshop 2 points, I'll have to learn how to use that first.

@Bizzy I'll be sure to add what you said.

Overall design of it will change, I.e font etc, Color is customizable in the Config file, so is alot of features. Anyway, will get on it now thanks!

Yeah like everyone else said, try making the UI a little nicer and make sure to implement support for other currencies, keep in mind this script could be used on gamemodes other than DarkRP, I would also recommend creating a option to have the perma weapons shop bound to a command, that way you could use it in gamemodes like TTT or something.

An in-game config is also a really nice feature, not sure how experienced you are with Lua but it's a really nice thing to add, it will make it much more user friendly, it will also increase your chances on getting the script accepted, and of course it will increase sales.

Good luck man, be sure to ask us if you're stuck - sure someone can help you :)

I'm not great at Lua tbh, I know scripting as a whole, so I use that knowledge, but it's going great for now.

ByMobieat 11th of July 2018 00:35:42

I'm not great at Lua tbh, I know scripting as a whole, so I use that knowledge, but it's going great for now.

don't come here for validation then, you'll probably get better responses on FP if you're actually looking for feedback

Well I got perfectly good feedback here? This is the perfect place, this website is about addons for gmod? This is an addon...

Edited Updated the UI a little bit, need to work on the admin screen :/ Any ideas?

that actually looks really good

ByMobieat 14th of July 2018 18:26:31

Well I got perfectly good feedback here?This is the perfect place, this website is about addons for gmod?This is an addon...EditedUpdated the UI a little bit, need to work on the admin screen :/ Any ideas?

It's a huge improvement definitely but your text still isnt properly aligned

GMODSTORE really needs some good shop npcs, please continue to work on stuff like this everything else does not look nice.

ByThePatchWorkHoaxat 29th of July 2018 22:45:20

GMODSTORE really needs some good shop npcs, please continue to work on stuff like this everything else does not look nice.

cough, cough https://www.gmodstore.com/scripts/view/5540/tstore-the-better-way-to-shop

ByObitus [ON HOLIDAY / BACK 20th AUGUST]at 30th of July 2018 00:58:36

cough, coughhttps://www.gmodstore.com/scripts/view/5540/tstore-the-better-way-to-shop

Ohh I saw that and it looks very nice, if I do start a darkrp server I might get it, if no one wants to make my custom script.

ByThePatchWorkHoaxat 29th of July 2018 22:45:20

GMODSTORE really needs some good shop npcs, please continue to work on stuff like this everything else does not look nice.

Threeshop? 🤔

ByThreebowat 30th of July 2018 01:51:32

Threeshop? 🤔

Haha, I'd totally buy threeshop as long as I can not just use 3 entities per shop xD.