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Hi, thank you for clicking on the thread.

I recently started with designing as for It's quite interested, I gave a shot at making a future script design. It's my second try so I can't expect it to be professional exactly. If you guys could leave a comment on what you think about it and how I can improve it, I would highly appreciate it =) I will add more design as I make it. Ignore the 'Nickolay' text, just some watermark I made.

Best Regards, Nickolay

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#2

The size of the banner is gmodstores' and we're not there yet The two headers fonts are pretty ugly imo Should add more color to grab the eye, it's pretty dark and people won't notice it as much as a light banner.

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#3

Remove the god damn watermark.

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#4

Remove watermark Change font Remove watermark Get a nicer Color palette Remove watermark

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#5
ByLunaversity.xyz 💮at 21st of February 2017 13:10:34
The size of the banner is gmodstores' and we're not there yetThe two headers fonts are pretty ugly imoShould add more color to grab the eye, it's pretty dark and people won't notice it as much as a light banner.

I'm aware of the size, I am designing for gmodstore in the future, which is why I am using the size. It's no point in making logo's and stuff if I am just going to make headers in the future.

Why remove the watermark? Like, I just want opinions then you complain on a watermark that is quite small in left-bottom corner? Ty for the opinions anyway.

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It is not quite small - it is even bigger than the labels on the right, do you want people to look at your scripts features or the watermark? It's like you've put it there just for the bragging right. It's gonna be your script, of course it is going to be obvious that graphic is yours, don't need to show it lol. I doubt that anyone would want to steal it, what for anyways? It would look more professional without the watermark.

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ByNickolayat 21st of February 2017 21:59:03
I'm aware of the size, I am designing for gmodstore in the future, which is why I am using the size.It's no point in making logo's and stuff if I am just going to make headers in the future.Why remove the watermark?Like, I just want opinions then you complain on a watermark that is quite small in left-bottom corner?Ty for the opinions anyway.

you aren't expecting script authors to put your stupid ass username in their banners are you? i'd hope you're just putting it their for... some reason related to this thread.

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#8
ByATomIKat 21st of February 2017 22:34:32
you aren't expecting script authors to put your stupid ass username in their banners are you? i'd hope you're just putting it their for... some reason related to this thread.

Wow, chill dude. What's up with the rudeness, are you offended?

Anyway, I think you all misunderstood. I'm not going to publish the script or the banner, I just made the watermark when I posted the banner, I did it on multiple spots. I have no intention of making a script due my lack of lua knowledge.

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ByNickolayat 21st of February 2017 23:29:19
What's up with the rudeness, are you offended?I'm not going to publish the script or the banner

offended for what? you're dumb. you never stated in the op if you're publishing it for devs or preparing it for your script so everyone assumed you were publishing it for devs.

back to your help me thread:

bright, heavy gradient, bolded text on black cant be seen from the size of banners on the script page, so i wouldn't be using a design like this.

i.e.

no

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ByATomIKat 21st of February 2017 23:56:38
offended for what? you're dumb. you never stated in the op if you're publishing it for devs or preparing it for your script so everyone assumed you were publishing it for devs.back to your help me thread:bright, heavy gradient, bolded text on black cant be seen from the size of banners on the script page, so i wouldn't be using a design like this.i.e.no

Seemed like you got offended since you went offensive. "put your stupid ass username"

Anyway, It's common sense to understand that It's not going to be used for a script if you actually read the thread. " It's my second try so I can't expect it to be professional exactly." "I recently started with designing as for It's quite interested, I gave a shot at making a future script design." Note the "future script design".

You really need to correct your points before you start to disrespect people.

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ByNickolayat 22nd of February 2017 00:01:55
Seemed like you got offended since you went offensive.

offended for what? that's how i talk. get used to seeing curse words on the internet child.

" It's my second try so I can't expect it to be professional exactly.""I recently started with designing as for It's quite interested, I gave a shot at making a future script design."Note the "future script design".

there a tons of people who give their first try on a banner and give it to their friends or release it for devs. you saying "future script design" can mean anything. you're counter arguments to a shitpost are vague. a better counter argument would be this is off-topic :p

You really need to correct your points before you start to disrespect people.

point* btw. you really need to stop posting vague shit. how are we suppose to read your mind

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why arent u going after momox he said a naughty word too :c

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once again if you feel disrespected because of that you should off yourself and save us the oxygen

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#12

I guess someone needs to eat snickers, becasue they become total douche when they are hungry.

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ByPinguat 22nd of February 2017 10:31:47
I guess someone needs to eat snickers, becasue they become total douche when they are hungry.

expect shit posts in shit posts

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#14

This escalated quickly. How long was I asleep for?

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#15
ByATomIKat 22nd of February 2017 01:12:121why arent u going after momox he said a naughty word too :c

Ok I admit, I wrote a little bit too fast...

So, here's the thing dude...

If you're making banner/header for your own script, it's totally ok to put your name on it, BUT if you do it for someone else, then the only name you should see on the image is the name of the developer, not the name of the banner designer. Especially if you get payed for your work, people expect you to remove any watermarks (on the finished product of course, it's okay to put a watermark on it if they haven't payed for it yet). Ask them to credit you in the script description, but watermarks are a No-Go! No one wants that on an image, it just ruins the whole image in my opinion.

And if I see a header/banner with a watermark on it, I normally create a new one for the script-owner, completely free, watermark free and without begging/forcing them to credit me, just because I hate watermarks so hard.

Have a nice day & Stop this bitchfight (@Everyone)

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#16

@ATomIK - What is your problem? enter image description here

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#17

Ok now for real, ATomIK it's enough now.

You're a content creator, stop insulting and quit this bitchfight please.

You, starting to be toxic

No one really agrees with that one...

And no comment to this... this is just ridiculous and childish

You're all in all just pretty toxic, he asked for opinions, that's ok, he might handled the "remove the watermark"-opinion not pretty well, but it was you to start being rude and offensive, so please, don't take this too seriously, It's pretty obvious I'm not the only one thinking this. So just stop it, I'm pretty sure you're mentally able to express your self in a different way without insulting etc.

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ByMomoxat 23rd of February 2017 09:36:11
You, starting to be toxic

agreed, probably shouldve removed the ass

No one really agrees with that one...

meh

And no comment to this... this is just ridiculous and childish

so is following me through threads that matter somewhat and rating my legitimate posts dumb. so is posting in this thread instead of pming me just to start more shit.

BySnorlakat 23rd of February 2017 06:30:20
@ATomIK - What is your problem?

you should ask yourself the same question, how much free time do you have to be hunting my posts just to throw an icon at me? at least give your opinion if you can even form one.

You're all in all just pretty toxic, he asked for opinions, that's ok, he might handled the "remove the watermark"-opinion not pretty well, but it was you to start being rude and offensive, so please, don't take this too seriously, It's pretty obvious I'm not the only one thinking this. So just stop it, I'm pretty sure you're mentally able to express your self in a different way without insulting etc.

if you dont read it appears toxic, if you remove the "ass" from my first post he probably wouldnt have taken it that i was attacking his username. therefore he wouldnt have gotten so offended to start an argument. didnt realize a few curse words could change a tone into incoherent screeching. he didnt make it clear for all of us so i responded, but he obviously wasnt here to take advice so he kept going.

anyways, off topic went off topic.

ByMomoxat 22nd of February 2017 16:48:17
Have a nice day & Stop this bitchfight (@Everyone)

if anyone has anything else just pm me im not continuing shitposting

######needed boxes to move out

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#19

one shitpost to rule them all

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#20

Hi,

  1. Remove the watermark A. You're selling a script, so people know you made the banner. If not then put the persons credentials in the description to give them credit for the banner
  2. Change the font A. I understand it's Star Wars themed but some people might find it hard to read it. Instead give it the same look if you can. Either by changing the font or give it a light colored backdrop. This way people don't have to struggle to read your banner to see what you're offering to the public.
  3. Light to Dark transition A. From going to a light color to a dark, it seems to ME at least that its a little "unprofessional". Give it a smooth transition that way people will know its somewhat professional looking when trying to decide to buy it or not.
  4. Complementary Colors A. Try to look at a color wheel and decide from opposite colors. It's always good to see a good color selection in a banner to make it feel optimistic and friendly looking when looking at it. B. In my opinion you're only using 3 basic dull colors. I'm not saying make it bright as a fucking rainbow, but make it less dull, even though it's a Star Wars addon.
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