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Too Simple and Awful Code

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#1

Since it talks about GmodStore here i would like to say something..

i made a script recently, started working on since 28 feb.1 week ago its was on gmodstore for reviewing

2 days later i get a review for improvements (i did the improvements)

1 day after it got denied for a small improvement (done)

now i was waiting hopefully to get accepted for doing everything asked for

after giving all my time on weekends and fix/improving it get denied (like now i feel so dissapointed for the review i got )

Please i need a proper feedback regarding this work

  1. this script never existed on gmodstore
  2. legal way to make money in darkrp
  3. spending time in servers trying to make money using my script without getting caught

to finish that up WHY at the end do the support team say its simple after i used my personal time for improvements.

I know, i am a user , i am not trying to point anyone out but there is really simple scripts out there , that are listed for sell (i dont want to cause any drama)

Thanks

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#2

Can you share with us your idea? I'm interested to know.

#3

here you go a picture enter image description here

and thats the content http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1336565743

#4
  1. DRM support

???

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#5

i removed DRM but forget to delete this feature text, i find it useless

#6

I hope that isn't the lawn mowing system ripped from that SantosRP gamemode.

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#7

Your code is terrible, why do you think I refused to work with you

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#8

@Commander i didnt take the mower from them or anything, I made it from Scratch.

@threebow when i added you on steam i didnt ask you to make the mowing system for me, i asked you for a gamemode then i told you that i will pay for the gamemode to get done. you replied and said -I cant do it. so i said thank you and went to find someone else.Forget to say ,you denied me bc i didnt have Rep.(Thats Understandable)

NO need to go off track. ALL i need is a response , i dont like causing drama Thanks

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#9

D̶R̶M̶ ̶s̶u̶p̶p̶o̶r̶t̶ ̶a̶s̶ ̶a̶ ̶f̶e̶a̶t̶u̶r̶e̶?̶ Oh wait someone picked up on this

This sort of thing is probably best kept in the developer comments of your script.

#10

i removed it ,if you read the previous replies

#11

Wow you beat me by 7 seconds

#12

Here's my view on your script. The description looks WAY too unprofessional. It looks like some Indian tech scammer would send me in an attempt to sell a service to me. The listed features are stupid. "Easy to Config 100%" "Per Player Limit" etc, why don't you rather list "Custom model" "Optimized & Safe" "Grass System" and so on? Things that actually matter and will somewhat make your script look better. If you're unable to do it yourself, feel free to contact someone you know who are relatively used to the language.

There are so many ways to make your script look better in general and I hope you look into that after the main issue has been resoled. The models & general idea is cool if you keep it at a reasonable price. Don't sell this for too much simply because it won't be used as much compared to other items. It is a cool idea, but is nowhere near comparable to a printer system, bank robbery system and so on due to the usage of the items. Even though those things were not listed in your denied reason I felt like it would be nice to inform you from a client's view. Good luck.

#13

Thanks for your review , i will do some improvements after they tell me y my idea is simple over some scripts are already on gmodstore.

#14

just because you spend time time working on something doesn't means it will be good

Edited holy shit you niggas need to learn what feature means, DRM is not a feature, config is not a feature, custom UI is not a feature.

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#15

i dont care about the time i spent at first , i just wanted to know y after the 3 improvements they asked for ,then its gets denied for too simple and awful code

Code can be fixed that fine but for the too simple idea i dont get it

i said 2 times that i deleted it and thanks i will edit my description and features list etc .

#16

code should be correct -if-not-perfect- at the very first time you push it to gmodstore

it show you have little if not zero experience

Edited this is not a place where you play the lottery to get your addon accepted, it has to be perfect

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#17

the script is working fine since the first submit. The improvements were about extra features they requested and few changes to the U.I. no errors were reported

#18

Don't worry man, I had to fully recode my armory a few times for it to get accepted. The gui, sv, everything. It was a pain but it is worth it.

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#19
  1. Your indentation is all over the place
  2. All your code is in entity files when it really doesn't need to be
  3. The script is super simple and any competent coder could create it within an hour

We don't want people to be selling the first thing they make on gmodstore. There's a certain degree of quality that scripts need to be of before they get accepted and this didn't meet that. Rather than complaining about it, go away and improve your skills.

Edited Also just because we ask you to make improvements it doesn't guarantee the script will be accepted.

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#20

Why did you add Threebow asking for him to make you a gamemode when you can apparently code this addon? Can't you create your own gamemode?

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